Wednesday, 11 April 2018

my poem

4 comments:

  1. Hello Issac. I have enjoyed looking through your blogs. You have been working well on these. I especially like you poem ("I imagine fish in the water."), your hunting and fishing story and your war poem.
    Something for next time: take care when uploading a blog. In the sounds poem the image goes over top of text.

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    1. Thanks a lot for that I will use your tips next time on my work and I think it will be amazing.

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  2. Cool poem Isaac. My favourite bit was "I see rain clouds coming like a pack of wolves. Maybe next time you could make the slide small or medium because bigger than the length of your blog.

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    1. thanks andrew and I will try make it smaller

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