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Hi i am Nuradiin. I really like your poem about the soilders that fought for us in the wars. But have you thought about moving the grass pile and the poppy somewhere else because it is blocking some of the words.
Cool poem Isaac! On my blog I am doing a series of world war 1 poems.
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Hi i am Nuradiin. I really like your poem about the soilders that fought for us in the wars. But have you thought about moving the grass pile and the poppy somewhere else because it is blocking some of the words.
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